The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The chart displays the individual’s movement causes from their past locations to the capital of a specific nation between 2000 and 2015.
Overall
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, more
people
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started to move to the capital throughout the given period.
People
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’s motivations
was
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were
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by far work-related and education-related. Just a little
number
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moved to another destination
from
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for
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adventure-seeking reasons. The
number
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of individuals who came to
this
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capital showed an upward trend in all categories, except for the job opportunities after 2015. Just above 60,000
people
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came to the city to work and that
number
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rose to above 90,000 in 2010, before starting to slightly fall from there. The city was receiving nearly 25,000
people
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in 2000 and that
number
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increased dramatically throughout the entire period and finished
this
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trend at just under 90,000. Just above 10,000 individual moved their place to be near to their close ones like their families and friends.
This
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class nearly doubled itself in 10 years (in 2010) and showed a little increase after. Between 10,000 and nearly 18,000
people
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choose to move to
this
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city for fun and experiment.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • relocation
  • capital city
  • significant trends
  • statistics
  • notable reasons
  • comparison
  • trends
  • increases/decreases
  • popularity
  • paraphrase
  • outline
  • emphasize
  • highlighting
  • incorporating
  • optional
  • surprising trends
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