Some people believe that education trip or excursion helps promote overall holistic learning. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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contemporary era, the approach

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learning is transforming among scholars.

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, some individuals claim that educational

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and

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should be organised by

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, which can be beneficial for the

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development of students. I agree with

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notion and

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associated with

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are elucidated in

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paragraphs. Initiating with the best possible points, the first and foremost aspect is that visiting educational tours

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as museums, art

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galleries

and historical buildings can provide

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practical knowledge, which stays

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period in one's mind rather than theory.

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,

provision

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of new locations

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travelling

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geographical parts might enhance enthusiasm and

inquistion

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inquisition

between pupils to

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discover

different places. In Japan,

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, the Times of Japan newspaper published the majority of learners accumulate 90%

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appearing for final

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,

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practical knowledge, which they attained during workshops and tours.

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, participating in informative trips can prove an excellent way to overcome from monotonous curriculum system, as exposure to

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of sites can lead to

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learners

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mental

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physical health. Simultaneously, not only interpersonal but

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social skills can

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on

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the trip

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,

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, students will start feeling comfortable in groups. Socialization may infuse a sense of contentment, which will allow them to become familiar with each other. To illustrate

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, a survey conducted by the "University of Waterloo" states that public trips foster ample skills in terms of working in a team, group leader, sharing and many more, which enable students to settle in any type of workplace in future.

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, joining excursions

faciliate

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facilitates

individuals in several ways, as

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tendency offers them to get visualization and learn about different places.

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,

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mind

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and social skills

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help scholars to escape from boring study life.