You recently went on holiday and your friend lent you a travel guidebook. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend about the holiday explain how the guidebook was helpful say when and how you will return the guidebook
Dear Paul,
Hope you are doing well. I reached
from
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Niagara
in
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last
Sunday. It was so amazing
trip and your guide Correct article usage
an amazing
help
me very much.
Our first wedding anniversary was on Wrong verb form
helped
the Saturday
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Saturday
a Saturday
Therefore
, we planned a small trip to Niagara
. The Niagara
Falls is the
one of the main attractions in Change the article
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this
journey. I booked a hotel room which is facing
to Falls. So, we can enjoy our night with the beauty of Wrong verb form
faces
Falls
.
Your travel guidebook Correct article usage
the Falls
was help
me very lot. Change the verb form
helped
First
time we Change the article
The first
are
confused about the parking lot. They paying Wrong verb form
were
huge
price for parking. At that time, I remembered about your book. From Add an article
a huge
that
we got information Add a comma
that,
of
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on
cheep
parking areas over Correct your spelling
cheap
Niagara
and some money saving
tips.
I bought something for you from there. Shall we meet Add a hyphen
money-saving
on
our favourite coffee shop on Wednesday evening? I will return back the guidebook and gifts to you at that time.
See you soon.
Loving,
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Fancy
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Coherence and Cohesion
Begin by focusing on developing a clear structure for your letter. This includes a proper introduction, body paragraphs each dedicated to a point you need to address such as details about the holiday, how the guidebook helped, and arranging the return of the guidebook, followed by a suitable conclusion.
Coherence and Cohesion
Work on linking your ideas more fluidly. Transition words and phrases such as 'firstly,' 'furthermore,' and 'consequently' can help the reader follow your narrative more comfortably. This will enhance the logical flow of your letter.
Task Achievement
Ensure to directly address all parts of the task. Each point in the prompt - discussing your holiday, explaining the guidebook's usefulness, and detailing the return of the guidebook - should be clearly and fully explored for a higher score.
Task Achievement
Try using a variety of sentence structures and vocabulary to convey your messages. This not only makes your writing more interesting but also demonstrates your proficiency in the language.
General Advice
Be mindful of grammatical errors and aim to correct these in future writings. Errors can distract from your message and affect the reader's understanding.