Your next-door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter Describe the situation Explain the problem it is causing you Offer at least one solution
Dear
Mrs
Correct your spelling
Mrs. Charles
charles
,
I am writing Change the capitalization
Charles
this
to inform you that i
am facing Change the capitalization
I
lack
of sleep every night Correct article usage
a lack
due to
loud music
listen
Wrong verb form
listened
by
your Change preposition
to by
son
until midnight . I need to wake up early in the morning to prepare meal
for kids and go to work Fix the agreement mistake
meals
also
. This
activity of your son
impacting bad
on my daily routine .
It has been Change the adjective
badly
last
couple of days that your Change the article
the last
son
keep
on listening Wrong verb form
has kept
loud
Change preposition
to loud
music
and i
was calm in the beginning because Change the capitalization
I
i
thought Change the capitalization
I
may be
he was doing practice for his singing Correct your spelling
maybe
competion
,as far ,it never happens before. Unfortunately , the sound of Correct your spelling
competition
music
keep
on getting louder day by day.
Change the verb form
keeps
Therefore
, it has been getting hard for me to wake up early in the morning . Due to
this
, I am getting late for my work and my kids also
not
get ready on time . My productivity Add a missing verb
do not
keep
on Change the verb form
keeps
getting decrease
with insufficient sleep .
I am requesting if you could ask your Wrong verb form
decreasing
son
to keep volume
of Add an article
the volume
music
low in the night or may be
he can use headphones and close the windows Correct your spelling
maybe
while
listening to songs . This
would be really helpfull
for me Correct your spelling
helpful
as well as
for my family . I hope you understand my situation .
Thanks for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Roopkamal kaur
Change the capitalization
Kaur
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea and develops it fully. While your letter does this, additional detail and development could enhance clarity and impact.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of linking words to connect sentences and ideas smoothly. Phrases like "Moreover," "As a result," and "Consequently" can help achieve this.
task achievement
Your response to the task is generally good, but ensure to expand on each point with examples or further explanations where possible. For example, explain more about how your daily life is affected by the loss of sleep.
task achievement
Maintain a polite and respectful tone throughout, which you do well. However, pay attention to small errors that can disrupt the flow, such as typographical errors or informal language.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite