the charts give information about two genres of TV programes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia

the charts give information about two genres of TV programes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia
The bar charts illustrate the information about two genres of TV
programes
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programmes
programs
watched by men and
woman
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women
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and four different
age
groups
in
australia
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Australia
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with
both
instruments in percentages.The first bar chart
dispaly
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display
displays
the
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apply
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information
of
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about
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people
watched
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who watched
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reality shows and the second shows
the
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apply
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information
of
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about
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people
watched
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who watched
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game shows. As seen from the charts,
female
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females
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watched a lot of reality shows compared to men with
a
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figures
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figures
of 70%
while
men with
a rates
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a rate
rates
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of 38%.In
contract
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contrast
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,females have
less
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lower
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percentages on game shows with
a
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figures
a figure
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figures
of 60% and
mens
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men
with a 62%
rates
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rate
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.Next,
age
groups
with more than 45 years old have similar trends on
both
TV
programes
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programmes
programs
with
a
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figures
a figure
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figures
not less than 65%.Other
age
groups
from 25 to 44 years old on reality programmes have more percentages compared to people who are watched game shows with
a
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a figure
figures
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figures
50
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%,68%,38% and 40%,respectively.
Finally
,
age
groups
from 16 to 24 years old
both
have
same
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rates with a 50% each.
Overall
,
both
programmes have enough audience to watch their shows with no less than 30% each.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, groups, both, figures with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographics
  • viewership trends
  • genre
  • comparative analysis
  • distribution
  • notable deviations
  • cultural influences
  • societal factors
  • predictive trends
  • viewing preferences
  • target audience
  • popularity metrics
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