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The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999
#unemployment #rates #japan #march
The line graph illustrates the
percentage
 of unemployed people in two countries namely
US
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the US
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 and
Japan
 from March 1993 to March 1999. It is
cleat
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clear
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 that, over the given time,
United
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the United
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State
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States
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 saw a moderate decrease in the proportion of
unemployment
,
while
 there was a
sifnificant
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significant
 increase
of
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in
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 the same figure for
Japan
. At the beginning of the period, there was a large difference
of
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in
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unemployment
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the unemployment
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 ratio between
US
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the US
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 and
Japan
.
However
,
at the end
 of the period,
this
 figure
drop
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dropped
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 significantly, and there was a very small difference between the two countries. In
comparision
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comparison
 to 7
percent
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per cent
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 of
unemployed
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the unemployed
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 workforce in
US
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the US
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,
Japan
 had a much smaller rate, only about 2.25
percent
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per cent
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. After that, the situation in the US
labor
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labour
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 market became better and the
unemployment
percentage
drop
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dropped
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 gradually to just slightly over 4
percent
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per cent
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.
By contrast
,
Japan
 experienced a doubled rise in the
percentage
 of unemployed workforce. In 1993,
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the unempolyment
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unempolyment
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unemployment
 rate in
US
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the US
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is
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was
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 much larger than that of
Japan
.
However
,
this
 figure
fall
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falls
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 over time.
At the end
 of 1998 and the beginning
if
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of
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 1999, the situation was reversed, the
unemployment
percentage
 in
Japan
 was eventually larger than
US's
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the US's
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 figures.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, japan, unemployment with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unemployment rate
  • Trend
  • Comparison
  • Period
  • Sharp increase/decrease
  • Correlation
  • Economic policies
  • Technological advancements
  • Global economic conditions
  • Consumer spending
  • Social welfare
  • Public sentiment
  • Predictions
  • Economic strategies
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