The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The presented table provides data about the use of police budget
to
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by
a
various sources in 2 years, from 2017 to 2018. The illustrated pie charts demonstrate information on what the collected cash was spent.
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
According to
the table, in both years the vast majority of money
from budget
was financed Add an article
the budget
to
national governments, Change preposition
by
whereas
a tiny minority was separated to
other sources (grants). As can be seen in the first chart three out of Change preposition
from
money
spent Correct article usage
the money
to
officers Change preposition
on
as well as
to
staff’s salaries, Change preposition
on
however
approximately nine times lower
Correct word choice
less
money
consumed
Verb problem
spent
to
technology.
By 2018, all 3 source options showed an upward trend. Change preposition
on
Meanwhile
the top improvement was by local taxes 11.1m of growth. Add a comma
Meanwhile,
Moreover
, spent of money
by 2018 was
decreased Unnecessary verb
apply
in
salaries option, and stayed with no change Change preposition
apply
on
buildings and transport Change preposition
in
option
, technology Fix the agreement mistake
options
option
showed a 6% Fix the agreement mistake
options
of
rise.
The total figures for police budgets were 304.7m and 318.6m respectively.Change preposition
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