The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
There are 2 data points below that illustrate
income
and outcome of the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of the UK.
Correct article usage
the income
Overall
, we can notice that spendings
similar to Correct your spelling
spending
budget
Add an article
the budget
have been
increased. And the majority of income and outcome take national government and salaries for officers, respectively. Wrong verb form
has
For example
, in 2017, the national government allocated more than half the money, while
income from other sources is
only 38 million (which is just more than 10 Wrong verb form
was
percent
). Change the spelling
per cent
Furthermore
, the total amount of money in 2017 and 2018 did not change much; the difference was about 5 percent
.
The pie chart Change the spelling
per cent
also
suggests that the percentage of building and transport money did not change at all. And the biggest difference from 2017 was investment in the technology sphere. Because in
2017 it was only 8 percent, but in 2018 it has Correct word choice
In
been
changed Unnecessary verb
apply
for
almost twice.Change preposition
apply
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