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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist activities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist activities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate how an
island
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 is changed by constructing several tourist
facilities
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.
Overall
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, there are extensive developments in terms of accommodation and other
facilities
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, but the plants still exist with the same amount after the construction. Before the construction, the
island
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 only had a beach on the east
side
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.
In addition
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, the
island
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 was covered with tropical trees, both on the east
side
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 and on the west
side
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.
Furthermore
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, the sea is located on the northeast and south sides. For comparison, after the development of tourism
facilities
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, the
island
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 has six accommodations on the east
side
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, which are connected by plants.
Also
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, the
island
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 has nine accommodations and woodland on the west
side
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. Every accommodation is connected with a footpath.
Besides
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, the beach is connected with accommodation on the east
side
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 by another footpath. There is a reception building between accommodations on the east and west sides.
Then
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, on the north
side
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 of the reception building, there is a restaurant and a pier on the south. The restaurant, reception building, and pier are connected by a vehicle track.
Moreover
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, swimming
facilities
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 have
also
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 been built on the beach.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, facilities, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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