The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist activities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist activities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate how an
island
is changed by constructing several tourist
facilities
.
Overall
, there are extensive developments in terms of accommodation and other
facilities
, but the plants still exist with the same amount after the construction. Before the construction, the
island
only had a beach on the east
side
.
In addition
, the
island
was covered with tropical trees, both on the east
side
and on the west
side
.
Furthermore
, the sea is located on the northeast and south sides. For comparison, after the development of tourism
facilities
, the
island
has six accommodations on the east
side
, which are connected by plants.
Also
, the
island
has nine accommodations and woodland on the west
side
. Every accommodation is connected with a footpath.
Besides
, the beach is connected with accommodation on the east
side
by another footpath. There is a reception building between accommodations on the east and west sides.
Then
, on the north
side
of the reception building, there is a restaurant and a pier on the south. The restaurant, reception building, and pier are connected by a vehicle track.
Moreover
, swimming
facilities
have
also
been built on the beach.
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