The Table Below Shows the Results of Surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 About One University.

The table illustrates the results of surveys in 2000,2005 and 2010 about One University in five different aspects with instruments in percentages.There are five aspects displayed above namely technical quality ,print

resources

, electronic

resources

,range of modules offered and teaching facilities. As seen from the table , in 2000, the students at the One University had

gave

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given

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a good rate on the print

resources

with a figure of 87% and slowly increased to 89% after 5 years but had dropped to 88% in 2010.

For teaching

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Teaching

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facilities had a similar trend for the past 10 years with a number of 77%.

Next,

students

seen

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were seen

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gave

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give

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a low rating rates

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a low rating rate

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on the range of modules offered with not more than 32% each.

Finally

, the technical quality and the electronic

resources

had

a opposite rating rates

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an opposite rating rate

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for every

5 years

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5-year

gap and ended at 69% and 88% each ,respectively.

Overall

, the print

recources

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resources

and the electronic

resources

have

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had

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the same rates in 2010 which are

the

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apply

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higher among others.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

164 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Table Below Shows the Results of Surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 About One University.

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