The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map illustrates a

town

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of 65,000 people called Garlsdon. Two potential locations are determined for a new supermarket.

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, what stands out from the graph is that S1 is in a rural area on the outskirts of the

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,

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, S2 occupies a more urban position in the

center

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centre

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of the

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. As can be seen, if the

super market

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supermarket

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were placed here, it would be positioned in the north-west of the countryside between the railway line and the main road to Hindon, a

town

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12 km away with a population of 10,000.

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evident is in regards to S2, if built on

S2

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the S2

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site,

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, the supermarket would be just south of the railway track

withing

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within

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the pedestrianized

town

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center

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, which itself is surrounded

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a residential area.

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, to the west and the west of the supermarket would be the roads to Bransdon and Crandson respectively.

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the former is 16 km to the southwest and

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holds

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14,000 people, the latter is 25 km to the southeast and is home to 29,000 inhabitants.