The maps below shows an industrial area in the town of norbiton, and planned future development of the site

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illustract

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illustrate

an industrial area in the

toen

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town

norbition

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Norbition

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, and planned future development of the site. Detailed information is in the following.

Firstly

, it showed that factories will be replaced by

housings

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housing

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in the future.

Additionally

, more facilities will be

bulit

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built

such

school

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a school

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, playground, medical centre and shops. The school and

playgroud

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playground

will

palce

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place

on the east side. In order to

allowed

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these

building

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buildings

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to be linked and

convience

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convenient

arrived

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arrive

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, the avenue will be extended to various

direction

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directions

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. Not only the river will be passed by one of the

road

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roads

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and divided into two parts, but

also

the farmland will become smaller which

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is reloaced

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reloaced

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released

relocated

on the northeast side.

Furthermore

, a new traffic circle will be added on the south side which is near the shops and medical centre.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

133 words

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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The maps below shows an industrial area in the town of norbiton, and planned future development of the site

Some people think everyoneshould be a vegetarian because we do not need to eat meat to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, the government has tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative?

some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Time: 40 minutes Write at least 250 words In many countries, shops open for longer hours daily every week. What is the negative or positive effects of this on the shoppers and local community. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

task 1 One of your friends has opened his shop recently and invitied you to come but you cannnot go write a letter to your friends and says apology for not coming congratulate him what you will do for him?