The maps below shows an industrial area in the town of norbiton, and planned future development of the site

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illustract

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illustrate

an industrial area in the

toen

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town

norbition

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Norbition

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, and planned future development of the site. Detailed information is in the following.

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, it showed that factories will be replaced by

housings

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housing

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in the future.

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, more facilities will be

bulit

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built

such

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school

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a school

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, playground, medical centre and shops. The school and

playgroud

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playground

will

palce

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place

on the east side. In order to

allowed

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these

building

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buildings

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to be linked and

convience

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convenient

arrived

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, the avenue will be extended to various

direction

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directions

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. Not only the river will be passed by one of the

road

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roads

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and divided into two parts, but

also

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the farmland will become smaller which

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is reloaced

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reloaced

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released

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on the northeast side.

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, a new traffic circle will be added on the south side which is near the shops and medical centre.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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133 words

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The maps below shows an industrial area in the town of norbiton, and planned future development of the site

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, most of the information is available on the Internet, whereas in the past, knowledge was stored in books and on paper. Do you think the advantages of this situation outweigh its disadvantages?

Some people think that people who immigrate to a new country should accept the new culture as their own rather than remain in separate minority groups and live in different lifestyles. Do you agree or disagree?