The charts show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. In the pie charts, there were four majors given in those years: Computer science, Medicine, Business, and Law.
The pie charts below illustrate the different major degrees obtained at the National University for four different topics of Computer Science, Business, Medicine, and Law in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010 by students.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the Computer Science program percentage
was the same as the Business program in 1990 with 30% of the whole. However
, in the next two remaining years, Computer Science surpassed and became the most popular program, with the highest percentage
of 45 percent
in the year 2010.
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On the other hand
, 25% of all students had
studied Medicine in 1990, Unnecessary verb
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furthermore
, this
percentage
had increased and reached 30% of all, but this
percentage
did not remain the same and dropped to 25 percent
again in 2010.Change the spelling
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