The maps below show an Industrial area in the town of Norton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an Industrial area in the town of Norton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The first map illustrates, how the industrial area of Norton looks now, whilst the second plan indicates various refurbishments that will be done in the future. First and foremost, it is evident that all eight factories will be demolished.
Instead
of them, architects plan to build seven buildings suitable for housing, particularly, one larger in the North, three others in the east, along the
road
, and the
last
three in the Northwest by the newly constructed motorway.
Furthermore
, some amenities and facilities are planned as well.
For instance
, the school will be built in the East with the playground on the western side of it.
Moreover
, shops and a Medical Centre are to be constructed below the main circular
road
on the left and right sides of it respectively. Despite some changes in housing, numerous renovations and connections are on the map too. First of all, the circle will be linked with the Farmland by a
road
that crosses the river.
Moreover
, three additional motorways leading to the School, housing in the northwest and
to
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the main
road
are on the map too.
Finally
, a new circular way, connecting the main highway and the living area, will be constructed.
Overall
,
according to
the plan, the site will change beyond recognition. Now it is an industrial area,
however
, it will later become a residential one with all the essentials.
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