As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalisation. Some people fear that globalisation will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, when our society is in the stage of rapid transformation ,a tendency to increase

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the amount of factors which lead to globalisation can be observed. It is agreed, that

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issue can lead to the total

loss

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of cultural identity,as

cities

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and

variety

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of nationalities grow significantly and rural areas

appears

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to be less common.

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,will discuss why mass communication and transport rise

continuesly

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continuously

, followed by an analysis of consequences which can contribute to the negative development

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culture.

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with, the demand

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transport and expansion of

cities

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rises dramatically

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the increasing population growth.

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, a lot of people with different nationality immigrate to other countries, since they want to provide their lives with better opportunities.

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, the war in Ukraine forced millions of Ukrainians to immigrate all over the world. The statistics

shows

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,that only in Canada there were more than 200

thousands

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Ukrainians who moved there in 2023.

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, it proves that the demand to expand

cities

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,

work places

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workplaces

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and transport grows significantly. In general,

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these

reasones

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reasons

, cultures and nationalities are mixed,and

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issue can contribute to the total

loss

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of cultural identity.

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,

usually

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a tendency to safe traditions can be observed in rural areas,

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, the greater the population is, the higher the development of

cities

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is, and in

cosequence

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consequence

large

city

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centers

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displace the villages.

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, mixed cultures lead to the

loss

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of traditions and even languages.

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,

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common overpopulation can contribute to irreparable damage.

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,

this

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essay agrees with

idea

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that,

unfortunalety

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unfortunately

, globalisation has an adverse impact on

cultures

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cultures'

culture's

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identity

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identities

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and it can lead to their

loss

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