The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012

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1972 to 2012. It is

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obvious that

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Adult and children's fiction obtained upward

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. Analysing imaginary books show that, adult one stood

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fifth in 1972 which was followed by

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% increase until 1992, and

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leap obtained around one out of 2 in 2012. children's

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from 22% in 1972, and until 1990 and 2012, raised smoothly to 22% and 25% sequencly. Turning to

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, it can be revealed that

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books stood about a

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of all in 1972 which

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1972 and 1990

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to 8% in 2012,

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because it was at 15%

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time and hit around 20 out of 100 but tended a

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until 10% in 2012.

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The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012

Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

In the past people liked to store knowledge in books. However, in the present, we prefer to store knowledge on the Internet. Do you think the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

1.Adults today do not do enough exercise. Some people believe that showing major sports events like the Olympics or the Football World Cup on television encourages people to exercise. Others argue that there are better ways to encourage adults to move more. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that dangerous sports such as boxing, or motor-racing should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other causes. To what extent do you agree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant example or experience you have to support your answer.