The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012

The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012
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of sold
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1972 to 2012. It is
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obvious that
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Adult and children's fiction obtained upward
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tendency
and other
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genres
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. Analysing imaginary books show that, adult one stood
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fifth in 1972 which was followed by
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% increase until 1992, and
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leap obtained around one out of 2 in 2012. children's
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started
from 22% in 1972, and until 1990 and 2012, raised smoothly to 22% and 25% sequencly. Turning to
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of
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, it can be revealed that
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books stood about a
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quarter
of all in 1972 which
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rapidly to a fifth and 12
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1972 and 1990
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.
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to 8% in 2012,
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obtaining 20% in 1972 and 15% in 1990. travel theme was
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exceptional
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because it was at 15%
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time and hit around 20 out of 100 but tended a
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until 10% in 2012.
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