The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012

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of sold

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1972 to 2012. It is

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obvious that

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Adult and children's fiction obtained upward

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and other

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reached a

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. Analysing imaginary books show that, adult one stood

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fifth in 1972 which was followed by

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% increase until 1992, and

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leap obtained around one out of 2 in 2012. children's

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from 22% in 1972, and until 1990 and 2012, raised smoothly to 22% and 25% sequencly. Turning to

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type

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book

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, it can be revealed that

others

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books stood about a

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of all in 1972 which

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rapidly to a fifth and 12

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1972 and 1990

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to 8% in 2012,

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obtaining 20% in 1972 and 15% in 1990. travel theme was

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exceptional

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because it was at 15%

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time and hit around 20 out of 100 but tended a

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until 10% in 2012.

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