The bar chart below shows the percentage od Australian men an women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian individuals of both genders based on their daily

exercise

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from being fifteen years old until becoming 65 or older, in the year 2010.

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, it is noticeable that despite the males in the

age

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range of 15 to 24, other

men

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tend to do more

exercise

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each day compared to

women

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.

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data reached the maximum number of

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men

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from

age

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45 to 54, with 53.3%. On the one hand,

women

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showed more interest in having a daily routine for doing

exercise

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, from the

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gap between 15 to 24, with almost 53% of all individuals. On the other,

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data experienced a significant change among the male community after they reached the

age

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of 25 until becoming 64 years old.

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,

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this

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specific

age

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, the percentage of

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and

women

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reached almost the same percentage with almost 47% for both genders.

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chart, Australian

men

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were willing to do more daily

exercise

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compared to

women

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,

besides

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the specific period of 15 to 24 year olds.