The bar chart below shows the percentage od Australian men an women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian individuals of both genders based on their daily exercise
from being fifteen years old until becoming 65 or older, in the year 2010.
Overall
, it is noticeable that despite the males in the age
range of 15 to 24, other men
tend to do more exercise
each day compared to women
. Furthermore
, this
data reached the maximum number of itself
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men
from age
45 to 54, with 53.3%.
On the one hand, women
showed more interest in having a daily routine for doing exercise
, from the age
gap between 15 to 24, with almost 53% of all individuals. On the other, this
data experienced a significant change among the male community after they reached the age
of 25 until becoming 64 years old. Moreover
, after
this
specific age
, the percentage of men
and women
reached almost the same percentage with almost 47% for both genders.
To sum up
, according to
this
chart, Australian men
were willing to do more daily exercise
compared to women
, besides
the specific period of 15 to 24 year olds.Submitted by vaniaa.z.h2005 on
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