n some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

There are those who have a positive attitude towards renting a

home

instead

of

owing

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owning

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a

house

in some countries.

This

essay will explore the benefits and drawbacks of renting a

home

, and I will express my position that buying

houses

advantages

more

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for a longer life period, in terms of obtaining

individuals'

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individuals asset

asset

and personalising a

home

by

indivdials'

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individuals'

preferences. The view in support of renting

houses

is that

this

enables

people

a more flexible lifestyle.

For example

, residents can easily move to another

house

due to

their circumstances, including their work and income.

Furthermore

,

people

living in a rental

house

do not need to maintain the

place

, as all facilities

inclusive

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in a

house

are taken care

by

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its owner.

Therefore

,

this

living style, which is free from the role of

home

maintainance

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maintenance

, contributes to easing

individuals

' stress

as well as

saving their time.

On the other hand

, one of the major drawbacks of renting a

home

is that

people

will not obtain their

home

as

asset

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, despite paying monthly rent.

While

individuals

need to pay for their

place

by

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either one time or

applying

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by applying

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the

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housing loan system, owning

home

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a home

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can increase

peoples'

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people's

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asset

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assets

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.

Consequently

,

people

can feel more

secured

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about their long-term lifetime, which prevents them from

the

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anxiety

for

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their living places. In

addtion

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addition

, residents can

also

personalise their own

home

facilities in a significant way depending on their preference and lifestyle,

such

as kitchen system and bathroom.

This

flexibility enriches

people

's living and makes their

home

more

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a more

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relaxing and cosy

place

. In summary,

while

renting

houses

has merits, I strongly believe that buying

houses

significantly contributes to increasing

individuals

'

asset

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assets

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for their

long-time

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long-term

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lives

,

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and

also

enriching their daily lives by living in a finely customised

place

, featuring their own lifestyle.