The graphs below show a prediction to 2018 by the International Monetary Fund of the world’s Gross Domestic Product (GDP) growth.

#graphs #show #prediction #fund #world’s #product #gdp #growth

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

The line graph below represents a prediction for 2018 in percentages by the International Monetary Fund of the globe's Gross Domestic

Product

Use synonyms

(GDP) progression.

Overall

Linking Words

, there was a decrease in Gross Domestic

Product

Use synonyms

followed by a fluctuation through the years until a steady increase. From the year 2009, the world Gross Domestic

Product

Use synonyms

was -2.8% which sharply fell to -2.5% before it had a drastic increase of 2.5% in 2010. 2010 onwards, figures fluctuated between 2.5% to a low of 1.6% which was recorded in 2013.

However

Linking Words

, stability returned mid 2013 when 1.6% was recorded.

Then

Linking Words

one

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

, there was steady growth, with an increase between 1% to .1% until 2016. From 2017 to 2018 there was a slight decline of .1%,

thus

Linking Words

3.4% and 3.1% were predicted for both years in Gross Domestic

Product

Use synonyms

Submitted by caroloks on Mon Feb 19 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

▼

Vocabulary: Replace the words product with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.

▼

4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

134 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
International Monetary Fund (IMF)
economic health
global economy
trends
developed countries
developing countries
economic policies
technological advancements
geopolitical events
short-term effects
long-term effects
speculation
analysis
comparison
impact

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
Development in tourism offer very little direct benefit for residents who live in these areas. To what extent do you agree?
There are some people who think that the locals who live in places of tourist destinations have tiny advantages. However, cultivating tourism helps them grow their economy, from my perspective, I agree that constantly improving tourism industries is important because they can make more income.
9
band
Some people think that teachers are no longer needed because students can study via the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the advancement of technology and the increased number of people uploading content to the web, the internet is full of extensive information about almost anything. It is consequently an amazing learning tool. Some may argue that teachers are no longer necessary as learners can teach themselves by utilising resources available online. I completely disagree with this and believe teachers play an irreplaceable role in education by sharing personal experiences and providing emotional backing which are essential for a deeper understanding of learning.
6
band
Some people think that children should be home schooled when they are very young while others think it is better for them to attend a kindergarten. Which do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is a great deal of debate on which form of education is best for a toddler. Some people believe that it is essential for the young ones to learn at home; however, I strongly support those who think it is better for a child to go to kindergarten, as it improves the child's communication and provides basic academic concepts.
5.5
band
Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
Movies are tapped into lightening individuals' mental pressure. Compared to the domestic films, people tend to choose abroad movies as their favorite genetre. There are several reasons associated with this phenomenon, and I consider that local films are supposed to be more funded by governments.
5.5
band
Some people think that family has the most powerful influence on a child’s development, while others think that other factors such as television, friend, music have the biggest effects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Many individuals argue that family plays the most significant role in shaping a child's development, while others believe that external factors such as television, friends, and music exert a more substantial influence. I would argue that, although external factors can have an impact, the family remains the most powerful force in a child's development.

The graphs below show a prediction to 2018 by the International Monetary Fund of the world’s Gross Domestic Product (GDP) growth.

Development in tourism offer very little direct benefit for residents who live in these areas. To what extent do you agree?

Some people think that teachers are no longer needed because students can study via the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that children should be home schooled when they are very young while others think it is better for them to attend a kindergarten. Which do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

Some people think that family has the most powerful influence on a child’s development, while others think that other factors such as television, friend, music have the biggest effects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?