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The graphs below show a prediction to 2018 by the International Monetary Fund of the world’s Gross Domestic Product (GDP) growth.

The graphs below show a prediction to 2018 by the International Monetary Fund of the world’s Gross Domestic Product (GDP) growth.
The line graph below represents a prediction for 2018 in percentages by the International Monetary Fund of the globe's Gross Domestic
Product
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 (GDP) progression.
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, there was a decrease in Gross Domestic
Product
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 followed by a fluctuation through the years until a steady increase. From the year 2009, the world Gross Domestic
Product
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 was -2.8% which sharply fell to -2.5% before it had a drastic increase of 2.5% in 2010. 2010 onwards, figures fluctuated between 2.5% to a low of 1.6% which was recorded in 2013.
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, stability returned mid 2013 when 1.6% was recorded.
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, there was steady growth, with an increase between 1% to .1% until 2016. From 2017 to 2018 there was a slight decline of .1%,
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 3.4% and 3.1% were predicted for both years in Gross Domestic
Product
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words product with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • International Monetary Fund (IMF)
  • economic health
  • global economy
  • trends
  • developed countries
  • developing countries
  • economic policies
  • technological advancements
  • geopolitical events
  • short-term effects
  • long-term effects
  • speculation
  • analysis
  • comparison
  • impact
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