The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided table shows
that
Correct word choice
apply

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the
time
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range of unemployed people by 14 sorts (
housework
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, shopping, job hunting, visiting friends or relatives, gardening,
TV
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, reading, decorating, walking, nothing/sitting around, staying in bed, visiting town, playing
sport
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a sport
the sport

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, drinking) of activities in the
last
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year in
UK
Correct article usage
the UK

Your article usage with the geographic name UK may be incorrect.

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. The information is measured by not only gender but
also
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morning and afternoon.
Overall
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, in the morning, numerous of
man
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hunts
Correct subject-verb agreement
hunt

It seems that the verb hunts does not agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.

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job
Fix the agreement mistake
jobs

It seems that job may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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,
do
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and do

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housework
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,
whereas
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half of
women
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do
housework
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and go shopping
while
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they
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they are
they were

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jobless. In the afternoon,
man
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watches
TV
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or garden, despite
women
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do
Wrong verb form
doing

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housework
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or
visit
Wrong verb form
visiting

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friends and
realities
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relatives

The word realities doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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.
According
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According to

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this
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table, unemployed
Britisher
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Britishers

It seems that Britisher may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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hang out their spare
time
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for
housework
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, gardening, shopping and job hunting when they are
in
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apply

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inactive. The lowest spending morning
time
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could be seen in
category
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the category

The noun phrase category seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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of drinking, nothing/ sitting around and
TV
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in all genders.
Female
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Females

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, spending
time
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of
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on

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housework
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accounted
dramatically
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for dramatically

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greater than
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the male

The noun phrase male seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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male
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males

It seems that male may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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which
are
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is

The plural verb are does not appear to agree with the singular subject male. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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19% and 49% respectively, despite
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man
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men

It seems that man may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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spend
Wrong verb form
spending

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time
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of
Change preposition
on

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gardening
was
Unnecessary verb
apply

The verb was appears to be unnecessary here.

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the
Correct article usage
apply

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at 14% which is more than
women
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(2%).
On the other hand
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,
lowest
Correct article usage
the lowest

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afternoon
time
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was staying in bed, visiting town, playing
sport
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sports

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and drinking which accounted for under 5% in both genders.
Man
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jobless person watch
TV
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most at just 14%, even though
women
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do
housework
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highest 21%)

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, housework, tv, man, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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