The pie charts below show the comparison of exports in Great Britain over five years.
Two
pie charts above illustrate the comparison of various Correct article usage
The two
sectors
contributions to the exports in Great Britain during 2010 and 2015.
During the time period given, the machinery Change noun form
sectors'
sector's
sector
was the major contributor
, while
the organic chemicals sector
contributed the least.
In 2010, machinery, vehicles, and pharmaceuticals are
the three highest Wrong verb form
were
contributor
, which accounted for 29%, 28% and 27% of exports in the UK, respectively. Despite some changes Change to a plural noun
contributors
of
percentage in 2015, Change preposition
in
these three
Change the determiner
this three sector
these three sectors
sector
remained to be the major contributor
. In 2015, both machinery
and vehicles Correct article usage
the machinery
sector
experienced a slight increase of 1%, while
the pharmaceuticals sector
experienced 9
% decrease in its contribution.
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a 9
Organic
chemicals Correct article usage
The organic
sector
contributed the least among any other sector
in both 2010 and 2015. This
particular sector
only contributed for
7% of Change preposition
to
export
in 2010. Fix the agreement mistake
exports
Although
there was a slight increase of 3% in 2025, this
sector
remained to be the least contributor
of
exports in the UK.Change preposition
to
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