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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#computers #languages #waste #time
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Nowadays, many
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translate
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extremely
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a
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, their eyes become dim, humans gain weight. Another significant reason can be that attempts are
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 learning other languages are breaking a waste of time.
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health. They always get fit two eyes. Maybe, it has benefits from mental. I frequently used that from
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my future purpose. In conclusion, many
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it, especially, many youngest.
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the fast translator and it has lots of achievements.
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Task Achievement
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Task Achievement
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Word Count

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Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Computers are proficient in certain domains but struggle with complex language nuances
  • Machine translation lacks human touch and may not capture context accurately
  • Learning a foreign language is a valuable investment in personal development
  • Language learning fosters empathy and appreciation for different cultures
  • Multilingual individuals are in high demand in the job market
  • Acquiring new languages expands one's horizons and opens doors to new opportunities
  • Bilingualism enhances cognitive flexibility and problem-solving abilities
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