The pie charts below show the comparison of exports in Great Britain over five years.
The pie charts above illustrate the comparison between 2010's and 2015's exports of several
commodities
in Great Britain. There are five commodities
the export data has presented in the form of percentage
. Those five Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
commodities
presented are machinery, vehicles, pharmaceuticals, plastics and organic chemicals.
From the two pie charts, it can be seen that over those five years, there is
no dramatic rise Wrong verb form
has been
of
exports Change preposition
in
in
any commodity. The maximum increase is only 4% for plastic material. It is Change preposition
of
then
followed by organic chemicals with the
rise Correct article usage
a
as
much as 3%. What happened to pharmaceutical products is quite the contrary, where there isChange preposition
of as
8
% extreme plunge in total.
Correct article usage
an 8
Whereas
the other two commodities
which are machinery and vehicles, there is only 1
% improvement in 2015 from the previous year of 2010.
In conclusion, there is quite a trend for plastic use to have Correct article usage
a 1
huge
increment in demand than Add an article
a huge
other
four Correct article usage
the other
commodities
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