Whether men and women should have distinct careers for each sexuality, since they have distinguished qualities, is a highly debatable question. The author believes that there should not be any specific roles
to
each sex because of satisfaction Change preposition
for
in
jobs and gender equality.
It should be self-aware that job satisfaction is always the most important thing in business. Since everyone has the right to pursue careers that suit them, there are no reasons to restrain the job’s limit Change preposition
with
according to
sexuality, which may sometimes make people Linking Words
frustrating
. Take Thailand as a prime example, job satisfaction’s level was reported to Replace the word
frustrated
increased
sharply since the rules regarding roles of different sexes in the industry were removed. Change the verb
increase
Thus
, Linking Words
improve
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improving
overall
level of happiness of the whole nation.
Another factor that Linking Words
worth
mentioning is the rising trend of equality in genders. Add a missing verb
is worth
In other words
, females are able to pursue occupations that Linking Words
usually
believed to be only available to males and Add a missing verb
are usually
also
in the other way. In the USA, more than 50% of politicians are actually female. Linking Words
Hence
, erasing the barrier between these two sexes.
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However
, some critics argue that to some Linking Words
extents
especially strength Fix the agreement mistake
extent
that
women are weaker than their counterparts and Correct pronoun usage
apply
therefore
, occupations regarding each gender should be separated. Linking Words
This
can be true, but it would conflict with the norm of Linking Words
this
modern age, where female people Linking Words
urge
to find work that can prove their values Wrong verb form
are urged
as well as
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authorities
and, Fix the agreement mistake
authority
in
the other way, men long for careers that can ease their mind. Thereby, sex discrimination is no longer worth mentioning.
In conclusion, I believe that both sexes should be guaranteed to take suitable occupations for them. Change preposition
on
Therefore
, distinct roles in society and business should not appear in perception or Linking Words
either
in reality.Correct word choice
apply