The given graph depicts the average figure of British citizens used to travel everyday by car,bus or train from 1970 to 2030.
The supplied line graph gives information on the car and 2 public transportation
travelers
in Change the spelling
travellers
the
Great Britain starting from 1970 till some projections in 2030. The vehicles that are taken into account are cars, buses, and trains.
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Overall
, Train and auto users have risen till today starting from 1970 and it is forecast that it is going to see upward trends for the future. However
, bus passengers have seen slight deterioration, alongside predicted
decrease for the next years till 2030.
Starting with the highest point is a car, it is clearly depicted that Correct article usage
a predicted
this
type of transportation was the most favourite,
and kept its prominence for a long period. Correspondingly, its indicator in the 1970s was around 5 Remove the comma
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million
people, however
, it had slightly risen to 7 million
by 2010, following anticipation a
significant rise to 9 Change preposition
of a
million
users by 2030. Similarly
, the number of train commuters had also
seen a steady increase till 2010 going from 2 to 3 million
, by
following Change preposition
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projected
dramatic uplift from 3 to 5 Correct article usage
a projected
million
passengers in 2030. Unlike, bus users will have seen a meager
downturn till the 2030s, serving around 4 Change the spelling
meagre
million
people in 1970, 3.5 million
in 2010 and less than 3 million
for
2030.Change preposition
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