The chart below shows the oercantage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Whales between 1918 and 2011.
The line graph gives proportion of the houses in the UK and in Wales by classifying them into two categories: premises of the people who
live
in it or rented, between 1918 Wrong verb form
lived
to
2011.
Correct word choice
and
Overall
, the number of owned houses rose during the whole period
and the rented-accommodation
fell, they both were at the same level in 1971 and the Correct your spelling
rented accommodation
overall
trend can be described as a switch between two accommodations.
Premises that are owned by people live
in them increased dramatically during the Correct pronoun usage
who live
period
. It started at a quarter of whole
and rose to just above 30% Correct article usage
the whole
percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
remaind
around there in 1939 and 1953. It showed a steady increase until 2001 to just above 70% and fell to around 65% in the Correct your spelling
remained
remain
finel
year.
Rented accommodation was by far the Correct your spelling
final
higher
one with almost 80% at the beginning of the Correct word choice
highest
period
and showed a steady fell
in every decade from 1953 to 1991, after remaining nearly around the Replace the word
fall
last
decade it rose to just above 35%, first time in
60-year Change preposition
for
period
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