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The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
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The presented bar chart illustrates how
income
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 was distributed in towns and regional centres of Australia.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the highest ratio of revenue in
cities
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 belonged to middle
income
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,
while
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 the lowest one related to low
income
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.
Additionally
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, in regional parts lower middle salary provided the highest amount of
income
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. What can be concluded from detail is that the proportion of individuals who earned from $70000 to $120000 in
cities
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 was 35%,
while
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this
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 group in regional
cities
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 was almost 27% of population.
Moreover
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, the higher salary per year in towns belonged to 20% of poeple,
whereas
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 in regional centres
this
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 group was 5 per cent less. In terms of lower middle and low distribution of
income
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 yearly, both gropus experienced the lowest percentage in
cities
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 at around 14% and 30% respectively,
whereas
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 in the other part these quantities were at 21% and 34% of employees.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, cities with synonyms.
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