Some people prefer to go to health clubs and gyms for health care, some say the walking and climbing stairs are more effective. Discuss both vies and give your opinion.

A number of

people

choose

joining

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the

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gym membership or health communities in order to

mantain

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maintain

their

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healthy life,

while

the

remain of

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remaining

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them think that walking and climbing

stair

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stairs

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are more beneficial. In my opinion, going the

gyms

or

sport

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clubs will be useful if they do

this

consistantly

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consistently

.

However

, doing some regular movements

such

as walking and climbing will be more efficient.

One

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the one hand, there are multiple reasons why some prefer to do exercise at

gyms

even

thought

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though

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this

requires more money.

First,

gyms

provide many

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pieces of equipments

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equipments

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equipment

that will give the users particular goals.

For instance

, for members aiming to

burning

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the

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calories, they can utilize

treadmill

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a treadmill

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.

Second,

urban

people

having busy

schedule

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are able to keep their health after work. Going to the

gyms

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gym

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is the best choice for them without worrying about working hours.

However

, they will feel its effectiveness if they do

this

consistently since it seems to me that not every

members

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member

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can keep their motivation until reaching the goals or forming

this

habit.

On the other hand

, others consider walking and climbing

their

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daily exercise. As long as

people

can continually become active even

though

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just by walking or climbing stairs, they will acquire some beneficial things. Many

people

feel that those are more effective

due to

the things which

associate

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with

the

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money. The important thing is doing more movement with

consistent

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consistency

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regardless of the ways.

Furthermore

, those activities do not

demand

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anyone to have special skills and to learn how to use some particular tools like in

the

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gyms

. Meanwhile, those

kind

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activities

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will not give

people

instant results. In conclusion,

while

going to the

gyms

or joining

sport

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sports

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communities may bring

people

to

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apply

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the

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quick outcomes, doing some daily

activites

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activities

such

as walking or climbing the stairs will effectively give

people

long

terms

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effect of strength and health.