The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the Islips' map at the moment and the future changes which will be taken to develop the tiny city. It can be clearly seen, that the
road
will be added to round new houses, car parks, shopping
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a shopping
center
and Change the spelling
centre
bus
station.
Nowadays, in the Correct article usage
a bus
Northen
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northern
part
of the city there is a
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apply
country
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countryside
side
, the Southly
there are Correct your spelling
south
shops
, separated by main
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the main
road
. On the South-west side
there is a school, connected with Add a comma
side,
previous
parts by the main Correct article usage
the previous
road
. On the opposite side
of Islips's centre
there is a Add a comma
centre,
park
. Between park
and Correct article usage
the park
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the school
school
there is a housing zone beginning from the middle to the Southern Add a comma
school,
part
of the town's centre
.
In the future
the Add a comma
future,
centre
of the city will get many changes. First of all, the countryside will be replaced by the new dual carriageway road
and the Northen
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northern
part
of the shops
will be replaced by a bus station on the North-west side
, next to it there will be built a shopping centre
and a car park
. On the North-east side
new housing will be constructed. Add a comma
side,
Secondly
, the main road
between two
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the two
shops
will be replaced by the pedastrian
zone. The Correct your spelling
pedestrian
shops
southern to it will stay Add a verb
shops are
shops were
at
the same place.
The Southern Change preposition
in
part
of town's cente
will not be changed dramatically. The Correct your spelling
centre
park
will be reduced in size,
because new housing will take a Remove the comma
apply
part
of its place. The school and old housing will be separated by the round road
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