The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and

plans for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the Islips' map at the moment and the future changes which will be taken to develop the tiny city. It can be clearly seen, that the
road
will be added to round new houses, car parks,
shopping
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a shopping
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center
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centre
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and
bus
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a bus
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station. Nowadays, in the
Northen
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northern
part
of the city there is
a
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apply
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country
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countryside
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side
, the
Southly
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south
there are
shops
, separated by
main
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the main
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road
. On the South-west
side
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side,
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there is a school, connected with
previous
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the previous
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parts by the main
road
. On the opposite
side
of Islips's
centre
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centre,
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there is a
park
. Between
park
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the park
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and
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the school
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school
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school,
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there is a housing zone beginning from the middle to the Southern
part
of the town's
centre
. In the
future
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future,
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the
centre
of the city will get many changes. First of all, the countryside will be replaced by the new dual carriageway
road
and the
Northen
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northern
part
of the
shops
will be replaced by a bus station on the North-west
side
, next to it there will be built a shopping
centre
and a car
park
. On the North-east
side
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side,
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new housing will be constructed.
Secondly
, the main
road
between
two
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the two
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shops
will be replaced by the
pedastrian
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pedestrian
zone. The
shops
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shops are
shops were
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southern to it will stay
at
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in
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the same place. The Southern
part
of town's
cente
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centre
will not be changed dramatically. The
park
will be reduced in size
,
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apply
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because new housing will take a
part
of its place. The school and old housing will be separated by the round
road
.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, part, side, shops, centre, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pedestrian-only zone
  • dual carriageway
  • current
  • surrounded by
  • propose
  • infrastructure
  • bus station
  • car park
  • residential housing
  • traffic flow
  • connectivity
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • development plans
  • main features
  • town center
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