Car ownership has increased so raipdly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

Owner
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Owners
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of cars
are raised
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have risen
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so fast during
last
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the last
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three decades and it
is
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has
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caused
for
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apply
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serious
vehicles
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vehicle
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congestion. The government should take
necessary
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the necessary
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steps to tackle
this
burning status.
Now a days
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Nowadays
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, people are
high
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highly
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connected with their personal vehicles for
neumerous
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numerous
reasons.
Such
as,
go
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going
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to
office
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the office
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and school. Because of a lot of car users, it
create
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creates
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trouble in the road.
As a result
, individuals are stuck on the way and create traffic
jam
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jams
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, which
is
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are
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main
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the main
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reasons for losing daily working
hour
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hours
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.
Additionally
, humans
are used
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use
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their own transport for travelling short
distance
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distances
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. So, the more number of cars
in
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on
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roads
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the roads
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, which is another cause behind
this
occurance
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occurrence
.
Moreover
,
public
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the public
a public
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who
lived
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live
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in city areas feel comfortable
for
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apply
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using their
motor's
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motor
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, which
encourage
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encourages
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them to break the rules of transportation
number
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numbers
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in
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on
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the highway.
For instance
,
in
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apply
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Dhaka
produce
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produces
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more traffic congestion situations.
On the other hand
,
government
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the government
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can follow some laws and take proper steps to control
this
odd environment.
For example
, if they maintain the license accurately, the fake ownership of motors gradually
decrease
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decreases
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.
In addition
, they make some extra rules
such
as,
give
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giving
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punishment when
operate
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operating
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during peak
period
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periods
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,
only
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and only
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limited
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a limited
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number
vehicles
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of vehicles
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are permitted.
Furthermore
,
authority
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authorities
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can encourage people through media, like television
documentary
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documentaries
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and newspaper publicity to use public transport, which is cheap and available. It is the best solution to reduce
this circumstances
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this circumstance
these circumstances
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. If
ministry
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the ministry
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built more bypass
way
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ways
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, it
can
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could
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help to solve
this
issue.
Finally
,
authority
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authorities
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can give
subsidy
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subsidies
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in
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to
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railway
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railways
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, tram and local bus services for comfortable
journey
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journeys
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, which influence humans to use these.
Such
as, in Bangladesh,
metrorail
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reduce
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reduces
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public hessel, travelling
cost
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costs
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and time. In conclusion, unless take proper steps against
this
, it will
be caused
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cause
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for
economy
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economic
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downturn and
whole
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the whole
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country become chaos.
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