Car ownership has increased so raipdly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?
Owner
of cars Fix the agreement mistake
Owners
are raised
so fast during Verb problem
have risen
last
three decades and it Correct article usage
the last
is
caused Verb problem
has
for
serious Change preposition
apply
vehicles
congestion. The government should take Change the noun form
vehicle
necessary
steps to tackle Correct article usage
the necessary
this
burning status.
Now a days
, people are Correct the word
Nowadays
high
connected with their personal vehicles for Replace the word
highly
neumerous
reasons. Correct your spelling
numerous
Such
as, go
to Wrong verb form
going
office
and school. Because of a lot of car users, it Correct article usage
the office
create
trouble in the road. Change the verb form
creates
As a result
, individuals are stuck on the way and create traffic jam
, which Fix the agreement mistake
jams
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
main
reasons for losing daily working Correct article usage
the main
hour
. Fix the agreement mistake
hours
Additionally
, humans are used
their own transport for travelling short Wrong verb form
use
distance
. So, the more number of cars Fix the agreement mistake
distances
in
Change preposition
on
roads
, which is another cause behind Correct article usage
the roads
this
occurance
. Correct your spelling
occurrence
Moreover
, public
who Add an article
the public
a public
lived
in city areas feel comfortable Wrong verb form
live
for
using their Change preposition
apply
motor's
, which Change noun form
motor
encourage
them to break the rules of transportation Correct subject-verb agreement
encourages
number
Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
in
the highway. Change preposition
on
For instance
, in
Dhaka Change preposition
apply
produce
more traffic congestion situations.
Correct subject-verb agreement
produces
On the other hand
, government
can follow some laws and take proper steps to control Add an article
the government
this
odd environment. For example
, if they maintain the license accurately, the fake ownership of motors gradually decrease
. Correct subject-verb agreement
decreases
In addition
, they make some extra rules such
as, give
punishment when Wrong verb form
giving
operate
during peak Change the verb form
operating
period
, Fix the agreement mistake
periods
only
Correct word choice
and only
limited
number Correct article usage
a limited
vehicles
are permitted. Change preposition
of vehicles
Furthermore
, authority
can encourage people through media, like television Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
documentary
and newspaper publicity to use public transport, which is cheap and available. It is the best solution to reduce Fix the agreement mistake
documentaries
this circumstances
. If Change the determiner
this circumstance
these circumstances
ministry
built more bypass Correct article usage
the ministry
way
, it Fix the agreement mistake
ways
can
help to solve Wrong verb form
could
this
issue. Finally
, authority
can give Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
subsidy
Fix the agreement mistake
subsidies
in
Change preposition
to
railway
, tram and local bus services for comfortable Fix the agreement mistake
railways
journey
, which influence humans to use these. Fix the agreement mistake
journeys
Such
as, in Bangladesh, metrorail
Change the capitalization
Metrorail
reduce
public hessel, travelling Correct subject-verb agreement
reduces
cost
and time.
In conclusion, unless take proper steps against Fix the agreement mistake
costs
this
, it will be caused
for Wrong verb form
cause
economy
downturn and Replace the word
economic
whole
country become chaos.Correct article usage
the whole
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