The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffe and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart gives information about the amount of
coffe
and tea consumed or bought by some Australian citizens.
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coffee
Overall
, it can be seen that persons
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people
prefered
to go to a cafe Correct your spelling
prefer
for drinking
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to drink
coffe
or tea as opposed to Correct your spelling
coffee
bying
instant or fresh Correct your spelling
buying
being
coffee
in all five cities. In addition
, people in Melbourne drank their coffee
and tea in a coffee
shop more than their counterparts in mentioned cities.
Looking at the details, the figure for individuals who went to a cafe in Melbourne, peaked at approximately 63%, while
this
figure for citizens of Adelaide was the lowest rate among all cities at just under 50%. Also
, while
in Hobart about 53% of city residents bought instant coffee
in 4 weeks, the percentage for Sydney was a little above 45%.
As regard
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regards
to
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apply
bying
fresh Correct your spelling
buying
bring
being
coffee
, less
humans were eager to buy Change the quantifier
fewer
them
. Correct pronoun usage
it
Hence
, in Brisbane and Adelaide, the ratio for it was around 33%, which is a negligible amount. But in Sydney, people showed more interest in bying
them, so the figure rose to 43%.Correct your spelling
buying
being
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