the maps below show changes in the city of nelson in the year of 2000 and the recent times.

the maps below show changes in the city of nelson in the year of 2000 and the recent times.
the given maps inform us about the change of landscape in Nelson city from the year 2000 to the recent times. From the maps,
it is clear that
seven new buildings were built in the period of 23 years. There was
also
an adjustment for the usage of the road.
Furthermore
, some new businesses were built during the given period. In 2023, the forest on the right side of
university
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the university
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was replaced by the new shopping
center
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.
Moreover
, there was
also
a new building on
left
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the left
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side of
university
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the university
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, called the
hall
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of
residence
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. The current train station was now built in front of the
university
and was connected by the tramline just beside the
university
. In front of the new train station, there is a city
center
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which now runs a bike rental scheme.
Furthermore
, there were a new shop and a new covered market on the right and left side of the city
center
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respectively. In
this
year, the road was now only permissible for pedestrians. In between the road and the port, there are new
restaurant
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and bars/clubs as well.
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