Some people think that men and women have differen qualities, therefore cetain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that
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males
and females have different
quaities
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qualities
, hat is why there are
jobs
suit
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suitable
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for each other. From
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, I disagree with
this
argument because of
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equality. In
ancient
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era, there are sex discrimination. It
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mean
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that
women
are
weaker
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the weaker
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sex, so they
could not
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do
jobs
which are assumpted suitable for
men
.
However
, in
this
era,
women
can do all the
jobs
that
males
can do, even more
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and beyond to
men
. A good example of
this
is that in some families,
women
work in offices and
men
do the housework.
On the other hand
, many people believe
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that men
and
women
should do
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suitable work.
Due to
the assumption that females are weaker
that
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males
, they cannot do some heavy
jobs
such
as building o working
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and
males
will never do the chores. It is true that there
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no differences between
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sexes in working effect because it depends on their abilities and
professional
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.
To sum up
, separate
jobs
for
men
and
women
is
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of equality, because it depends on
abilities
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the abilities
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and majors of each other to find
their
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suitable
jobs
.
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