Topic: Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is thought there are disparities in the types of job compatible for males and females owing to their distinct physical and mental strengths.

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occupational suitability based on is

justifitable

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to some degree, reality, in my

opinion

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has proven

otherwise

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. It is

the

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fact that all jobs

required

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not only physical strength, agility, well awareness,

social

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and social

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skills but

also

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need

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patience,

confidence

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and confidence

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in all cases of life. Owning a strong body with enough energy for many heavy works that speciality of

men

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. Meanwhile,

women

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are assumed to be best at tasks so

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they could take great patience

as well as

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skills to perform

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household chores.

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, both

men

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and

women

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could not exchange their jobs

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another ones

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because

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apply

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they

not

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good about many fields that

not

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did not

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belong

their

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to their

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understanding and

researching

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, I certainly believe that it does not have any specific rules for occupational compatibility regarding gender. Most

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men

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the men

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are growing

more and more better

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better and better

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with

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the

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teaching strictly

from

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their parents and teachers in the period time of studying at school so that they

aware

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of taking

responsibilities

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responsibility

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for childcare,

houseworks

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housework

finance

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and finance

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family

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the family

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, female

are

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showing

out

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perfectly

with

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their versatility in various jobs that

demanding

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both brains and intelligent

resolving

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. Nowadays,

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women

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women's

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gymnasts increased more than before

that

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which

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could help them gain

healthy

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and energy. In conclusion, some individuals

denied

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that mental and physical are not suitable

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for

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females but from my perspective, I think

men

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and

women

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are now equal in terms of

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aspect

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

262 words

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Topic: Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed. In which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion ?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

Every country should have a free health service; even if that means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through this service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree with this statement?