Topic: Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought there are disparities in the types of job compatible for males and females owing to their distinct physical and mental strengths.

Although

occupational suitability based on is

justifitable

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to some degree, reality, in my

opinion

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has proven

otherwise

. It is

the

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fact that all jobs

required

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not only physical strength, agility, well awareness,

social

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and social

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skills but

also

need

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patience,

confidence

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and confidence

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in all cases of life. Owning a strong body with enough energy for many heavy works that speciality of

men

. Meanwhile,

women

are assumed to be best at tasks so

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they could take great patience

as well as

skills to perform

like

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household chores.

In addition

, both

men

and

women

could not exchange their jobs

to

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another ones

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because

of

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they

not

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good about many fields that

not

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belong

their

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understanding and

researching

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.

On the other hand

, I certainly believe that it does not have any specific rules for occupational compatibility regarding gender. Most

of

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men

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the men

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are growing

more and more better

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better and better

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with

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the

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teaching strictly

from

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their parents and teachers in the period time of studying at school so that they

aware

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of taking

responsibilities

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responsibility

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for childcare,

houseworks

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housework

,

finance

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and finance

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of

family

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the family

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.

Besides

, female

are

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showing

out

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perfectly

with

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their versatility in various jobs that

demanding

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both brains and intelligent

resolving

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resolution

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. Nowadays,

women

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women's

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gymnasts increased more than before

that

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could help them gain

healthy

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health

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and energy. In conclusion, some individuals

denied

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that mental and physical are not suitable

to

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females but from my perspective, I think

men

and

women

are now equal in terms of

such

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aspect

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