The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecing and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecing and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph demonstrates the
number
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of travellers staying on cruise ships and on
land
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land,
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while
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visiting a specific island in the Caribbean and the total
number
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of visits from 2010 to 2017, measured in millions. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, both categories of
tourists
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experienced an upward trend, with the
number
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of cruise ship
visitors
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showing a more consistent and significant rise.
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, the total
number
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of
tourists
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had increased by the end of the examined period. Staying on the island was more preferred in 2010, with approximately 0.75
million
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visitors
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choosing to remain on land during their trip,
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only around 0.25
million
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travellers opted to stay on ships. The
number
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of on-land guests doubled from 0.75 to 1.5
million
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between 2011 and 2013 and remained relatively stable for the subsequent two years.
At the end
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of the period, land
visitors
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witnessed a decline of roughly 0.75
million
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before quickly rebounding to 1.5
million
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tourists
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in 2017. The
number
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visitors
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staying on ships fluctuated between 0.25 and 0.5
million
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initially
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. From 2012 onwards, there was a notable increase in
this
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figure, surpassing that of the on-land
visitors
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in 2016 at 1.5
million
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. Notably, the total
number
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of visits to the island saw a substantial surge, especially in 2017 when it rose sharply from 2.75 to 3.5
million
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tourists
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, tourists, visitors, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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