The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecing and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecing and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph demonstrates the
number
of travellers staying on cruise ships and on
land
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land,
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while
visiting a specific island in the Caribbean and the total
number
of visits from 2010 to 2017, measured in millions. Looking from an
overall
perspective, both categories of
tourists
experienced an upward trend, with the
number
of cruise ship
visitors
showing a more consistent and significant rise.
Additionally
, the total
number
of
tourists
had increased by the end of the examined period. Staying on the island was more preferred in 2010, with approximately 0.75
million
visitors
choosing to remain on land during their trip,
while
only around 0.25
million
travellers opted to stay on ships. The
number
of on-land guests doubled from 0.75 to 1.5
million
between 2011 and 2013 and remained relatively stable for the subsequent two years.
At the end
of the period, land
visitors
witnessed a decline of roughly 0.75
million
before quickly rebounding to 1.5
million
tourists
in 2017. The
number
visitors
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of visitors
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staying on ships fluctuated between 0.25 and 0.5
million
initially
. From 2012 onwards, there was a notable increase in
this
figure, surpassing that of the on-land
visitors
in 2016 at 1.5
million
. Notably, the total
number
of visits to the island saw a substantial surge, especially in 2017 when it rose sharply from 2.75 to 3.5
million
tourists
.
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  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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