The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecing and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph demonstrates the
number
of travellers staying on cruise ships and on Use synonyms
land
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land,
while
visiting a specific island in the Caribbean and the total Linking Words
number
of visits from 2010 to 2017, measured in millions.
Looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, both categories of Linking Words
tourists
experienced an upward trend, with the Use synonyms
number
of cruise ship Use synonyms
visitors
showing a more consistent and significant rise. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
had increased by the end of the examined period.
Staying on the island was more preferred in 2010, with approximately 0.75 Use synonyms
million
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visitors
choosing to remain on land during their trip, Use synonyms
while
only around 0.25 Linking Words
million
travellers opted to stay on ships. The Use synonyms
number
of on-land guests doubled from 0.75 to 1.5 Use synonyms
million
between 2011 and 2013 and remained relatively stable for the subsequent two years. Use synonyms
At the end
of the period, land Linking Words
visitors
witnessed a decline of roughly 0.75 Use synonyms
million
before quickly rebounding to 1.5 Use synonyms
million
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tourists
in 2017.
The Use synonyms
number
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Use synonyms
visitors
staying on ships fluctuated between 0.25 and 0.5 Change preposition
of visitors
million
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initially
. From 2012 onwards, there was a notable increase in Linking Words
this
figure, surpassing that of the on-land Linking Words
visitors
in 2016 at 1.5 Use synonyms
million
. Notably, the total Use synonyms
number
of visits to the island saw a substantial surge, especially in 2017 when it rose sharply from 2.75 to 3.5 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
tourists
.Use synonyms
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