The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The figures illustrate information about coffee and bananas which had Fairtrade labels and were sold in five nations in Europe from 1999 to 2004 (with units of millions of euros).
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, it can be seen that sales
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five countries in coffee increased with the
UK
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outnumbered
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others.
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, there was
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upward trend in banana sales, with the exception of Belgium and Sweden, which decreased. Looking at the table which informed about the budget for coffee, Switzerland witnessed a substantial increase to 6 from 3. In regard
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the
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, there was a sharp rise from 1,5 to 20, making the
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have the highest sales of
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nations in 2004.
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, Belgium started at 1, before going up slightly to 1,7. In relation to Demark, Sweden, there was a slight change from 1,8 and 0,8 to 2 and 1, respectively, from 1999 to 2004. Turning to the table about bananas, the
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was the highest of all mentioned nations in both years, soaring from 15 in 1999 to 47 in 2004.
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was followed by Switzerland, Denmark ended at 5.5 and 4 compared to 1 and 0.6 in the previous year.
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, Belgium saw a gradual drop from 1,8 to 1,
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Sweden began at 2 and ended at 0,9
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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