as transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, some governments are encouraging business to move to rural areas. do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

It is true that the world's largest

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are located in large

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. In the city many

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expect to find better employment opportunities, often with bigger, secure

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. as

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become overcrowded, problems relating to housing and transport arise, because of which some

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suggest that the larger

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should relocate to the countryside.

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may have some advantages,

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firmly believe that the disadvantages would be far more than the advantages. It is reasonable to think that moving thousands of employees from large

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out to remote

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would have a positive impact on the overcrowding of some

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. there would be less traffic because of less strain on the services offered by the

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, public transportation, restaurants and the like.

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would mean a reduction in queues and faster customer service. To add to it, housing would

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become affordable. It is generally seen that because of too many

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wanting to live in the city, land prices and event rents of houses start touching the sky. the problem

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would be that a dramatic reduction in

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of

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in the

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would mean that many

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would go broke. Restaurants, cafes and other service

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would suffer tremendously. What would happen is that overcrowding would occur where the new, large organizations relocate. More and more

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offering services would spring up- restaurants, shopping centers and other

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would be needed to serve the increasingly larger numbers of

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who moved to the area.

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, the rural area may not be able to provide the enormous quantities of housing, electricity and raw materials required to run a huge company.

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, relocating

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to rural

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may upset many households. Children

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may have to change schools. so It would not be practical to do so. Transport and accommodation problems in

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need to be sorted out by connecting the villages and

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very efficient public transport

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so that

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come to work in

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and live in rural

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. Newer

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should be encouraged to open in the suburbs; the already existing ones should continue to be where they already are.

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, relocating the

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would assist with the overcrowding problem in some

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.

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, a new set of problems would surface, which would be far more than the benefits.

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, I reiterate my point that the idea of moving larger corporations out to rural

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would not be beneficial.