as transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, some governments are encouraging business to move to rural areas. do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

It is true that the world's largest

companies

are located in large

cities

. In the city many

people

expect to find better employment opportunities, often with bigger, secure

companies

. as

cities

become overcrowded, problems relating to housing and transport arise, because of which some

people

suggest that the larger

companies

should relocate to the countryside.

while

this

may have some advantages,

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firmly believe that the disadvantages would be far more than the advantages. It is reasonable to think that moving thousands of employees from large

companies

out to remote

areas

would have a positive impact on the overcrowding of some

cities

. there would be less traffic because of less strain on the services offered by the

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, public transportation, restaurants and the like.

This

would mean a reduction in queues and faster customer service. To add to it, housing would

also

become affordable. It is generally seen that because of too many

people

wanting to live in the city, land prices and event rents of houses start touching the sky. the problem

however

would be that a dramatic reduction in

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of

people

in the

cities

would mean that many

businesses

would go broke. Restaurants, cafes and other service

areas

would suffer tremendously. What would happen is that overcrowding would occur where the new, large organizations relocate. More and more

people

offering services would spring up- restaurants, shopping centers and other

businesses

would be needed to serve the increasingly larger numbers of

people

who moved to the area.

in addition

, the rural area may not be able to provide the enormous quantities of housing, electricity and raw materials required to run a huge company.

Furthermore

, relocating

businesses

to rural

areas

may upset many households. Children

also

may have to change schools. so It would not be practical to do so. Transport and accommodation problems in

cities

need to be sorted out by connecting the villages and

cities

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very efficient public transport

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so that

people

come to work in

cities

and live in rural

areas

. Newer

businesses

should be encouraged to open in the suburbs; the already existing ones should continue to be where they already are.

To sum up

, relocating the

companies

would assist with the overcrowding problem in some

cities

.

However

, a new set of problems would surface, which would be far more than the benefits.

Therefore

, I reiterate my point that the idea of moving larger corporations out to rural

areas

would not be beneficial.