Some people are born to be leaders, while others believe leadership can be learnt. Discuss both views and give opinion.

Nowadays, various

argument

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regarding

to

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individuals have become a

leader

. Some

people

believe that the

leadership

skill

can be developed by

learnt

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from other

people

.

By contrast

, some other

people

argue that

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leadership

skill

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skills

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cannot be developed because they are born to be leaders.

This

essay will explain both views before demonstrating my argument. First and foremost, supporting

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of

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the views that the

leader

can be created by another

leader

which the connection of society can

support

to develop their

skill

such

as speaking and socializing.

Furthermore

,

organization

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organizations

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and technology which have created accessibility are more effective

to learn

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for learning

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leadership

skills from

internet

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the internet

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or brainstorming with another

leader

.

For instance

, Organizations at

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Universities

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have

potential

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the potential

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to create new

leader

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leaders

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because they have an abundance

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of event

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event

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events

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to

support

and improve member

skill

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skills

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such

as speaking in front of an audience and leading a project with other communities.

On the other hand

, some other inhabitants believe that the

leader

has a

leadership

ability since their born. In my opinion,

leadership

skills cannot grow when the

environment

is not supported

such

as limiting mentoring their

skill

and discussing with other

people

.

As a result

,

leadership

skill

is stuck in the position and potential

leader

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leaders

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can not

to

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be a

leader

.

For example

, Students at senior high

school

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schools

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have a huge potential to be

a

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leader

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leaders

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because the

environment

should

be supporting

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their abilities to be

leader

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leaders

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but in fact, amenities in some schools not supported to create a comfortable

environment

because it

is not

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support

by regulations and, they have not funded to create a

leadership

course

such

as mentoring and speaking class. In conclusion,

leadership

skills

created

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by

other

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another leader

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leader

which

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can be developed

by

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in

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some ways

such

as

mentoring

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through mentoring

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and

course

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courses

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and

support

by their

environment

.