The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevent.
The maps illustrate the developments which took place in the village of Stakeford in 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a partial transformation from a largely rural to a mainly urban area
.
In the year 1930, the village had a large farmland area
with several houses, but by the year 2010, the village changed a lot. The most noticeable is that farmland was transformed into a residential area
on the west of the main road. The shops were demolished and replaced by private houses.
Likewise
, farmland on the east of the road was also
converted into a residential area
, meanwhile, the building of the school was expanded with additional blocks. The large house was rebuilt and used as a retirement house.Submitted by s_syedy on
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