In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Write at least 250 words.
Upcoming
days, transport systems will Change preposition
In upcoming
free
from Add a missing verb
be free
driver
. Only individuals are able to Fix the agreement mistake
drivers
traveling
in driverless transportation. I think Change the verb
travel
although
some demerits, where vehicles operate without driver
, but merits are more than it.
Add an article
a driver
In
Change preposition
On
one
hand, Correct article usage
the one
firstly
, there are
no need to Change the verb form
is
appointment
an Replace the word
appoint
experience
driver. Change the verb form
experienced
As a result
, owners can save their money. Secondly
, software, which sets in transport system deals with according to
instructions. Such
as, if a person want
to go Change the verb form
wants
their
office within 30 minutes, the Change preposition
to their
programming
in the car Replace the word
program
able
to reach their destination in Add a missing verb
is able
fixed
time. It not only Correct article usage
a fixed
observe
time management but Correct subject-verb agreement
observes
also
maintain
traffic rules. Change the verb form
maintains
As a result
, there are
no traffic congestion occur in Change the verb form
is
roads
. Correct article usage
the roads
Additionally
, for long drive
, people will Fix the agreement mistake
drives
free
from tensions about driving. Add a missing verb
be free
Thus
, the main reasons
for Fix the agreement mistake
reason
these modern technology system
is Change the determiner
this modern technology system
these modern technology systems
lead
a Fix the infinitive
to lead
hassel free
life.
Correct your spelling
hassle-free
On the other hand
, it is not suitable to concern only positive site
, some individuals believe there are some drawbacksFix the agreement mistake
sites
,
because it has a life risk issue. If software systems fail to operate Remove the comma
apply
proper
instructions, thereChange the word
properly
a
high chance to occur Add a missing verb
is a
accident
. Add an article
an accident
For instance
, last
few years, a lot of people died by
road accidents. Change preposition
in
In addition
, it is a new technology in upcoming society so, men's
Change noun form
men
has
not Verb problem
do
appropriate
knowledge about Add a missing verb
have appropriate
this
. As a result
, people has
lack Unnecessary verb
apply
of
confidence Change preposition
apply
for use
Change preposition
in using
this
. Moreover
, it is a great issue for unemployment
problem, Correct article usage
the unemployment
due to
owers
Correct your spelling
owners
are
fired up their car operators.
In conclusion, Wrong verb form
being
Change preposition
in todays
todays
modern world each person trying to cope with new technology. Change to a genitive case
today's
Although
there are some harmful sites but
their advantages encourage everyone to enjoy a Correct word choice
apply
stress free
life.Add a hyphen
stress-free
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