The below graph shows different types of transportation chosen to go to work and return from work in one European city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates four different types of
transportations
preferred to commute for work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. The figures are measured in Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
percentage
.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the proportion
of bus passengers has an upward trend, while
the percentage
of car users has a downward trend over the given period. Moreover
, the percentage
of people commuted
by train and subway has fluctuated widely.
Wrong verb form
commuting
Initially
, in 1960, the proportion
of workers who opted to go to work by bus achieved nearly half of the total percentages, reaching the lion’s share of the users. This
percentage
then
consistently decreased in the two and four following decades approximately at
28% and 15% respectively. Change preposition
apply
Conversely
, those who chosen
to commute by car Wrong verb form
chose
obtaining
just under one in ten of the Wrong verb form
obtained
proportion
in the beginning, and this
number was continually increase
by around thirty Change the verb form
was continually increased
was continually increasing
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
at the end
.
Furthermore
, the percentages of train and subway users were vary
, with workers Change the verb form
varied
went
to work by the former Correct pronoun usage
who went
gained for
just under a quarter of passengers, Wrong verb form
gaining
while
the proportion
for
those choosing to use the latter accounted for slightly more than one out of four on the average over the period given.Change preposition
of
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, proportion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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