The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the proposed location for a new school in Canterbury, offering two different possible sites for it. From an
overall
perspective, it is clear that
there are two options for establishing this
school: one sited (S2) in the town center
, which is likely to be chosen, Change the spelling
centre
whereas
the other (S1) is positioned in the countryside.
To begin
with, the former location was free from traffic zones and near a university in the north. Subsequently
, this
area was enclosed by housing and was able to be visited from Chartam, which is a city with 4.500 citizens, by using the main avenue with a 7-kilometer travel distance. Moreover
, the other way to reach it is also
by going from Sturry, a town with 5,000 residents, toward 5 km to the southwest.
In terms of the second,
this
site is proposed in the northeast of the town center
, right in front of households. Change the spelling
centre
However
, it is estimated that this
area is closer to the second city than the other proposed positions.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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