some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many individuals argue that males and females have different qualities in certain
jobs
which are for each of them. Use synonyms
this
writer agrees that some Linking Words
jobs
are suitable for Use synonyms
men
and others for Use synonyms
women
.
It is a fact that Use synonyms
men
have a lot of different qualities from Use synonyms
women
qualities. Use synonyms
due to
males being stronger, Linking Words
having
physical Correct word choice
and having
body
more Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
good
than females. Correct word choice
apply
for example
, male muscles are bigger and Linking Words
developed
better than females. so, some Wrong verb form
develop
jobs
need using strength more than using brain or skill. so in some cases, Use synonyms
men
are suitable for some Use synonyms
jobs
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such
as construction,lumber,etc.
Turning to the other side, Linking Words
women
don't have strength and durability so they aren't as good as Use synonyms
men
in heavy Use synonyms
jobs
. but Use synonyms
women
are developed , mostly about imagining, creating and skill. Use synonyms
therefore
, many Linking Words
jobs
are suitable for Use synonyms
women
but not for Use synonyms
men
Use synonyms
such
as artists, content creators,etc.
In conclusion, Linking Words
men
are suitable for certain Use synonyms
jobs
, Use synonyms
as well as
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women
, Use synonyms
however
, with practice, and interest, people can do any job they want no matter about gender.Linking Words
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