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the chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart gives information about
distribution
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the distribution
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 of annual revenue in
United
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the United
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 States in three different years. The unit
measurment
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measurement
 is in millions.
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, it is clearly seen that a small proportion of
people
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 have the most excessive amount of
income
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.
Additionally
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, as seen in the brackets, the
income
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 distribution is roughly the same for each year. In 2011, the number of
people
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 with an annual
income
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 of $25,000 and $49,000 increased by approximately 5
million
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.
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, a slight decrease can be observed in the
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people
pople
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people
 with incomes between $75,000 and $99,999 In 2015,
while
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 approximately 27
million
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 households had an annual
income
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 between $25,000 and $49,000, the number of
people
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 with an
income
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 of less than $25,000 exceeded 30
million
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. In comparison, more than 25
million
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people
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 earned less than $25,000,
while
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 only about 15
million
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people
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 earned between $75,000 and $99,999.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, income, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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