The charts below how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurents between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The charts below how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurents between 2003 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The chart provides information about the
frequent
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frequency
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of the amount of fast
food
consumed in the USA from 2003 to 2013
Overall
, there was a downward trend in the
commonly
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people
ate
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eating
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fast
food
restaurant
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restaurants
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in United
State
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.
In addition
, the amount of
people
ate
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once a week registered the highest figure
throughtout
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throughout
for most given of the period, which peaked in 2006.
In contrast
, the proportion of consumer spending to
ate
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eat
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fast
food
every day accounted for the
lowesr
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lowest
lower
percentage
in
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all the time. In 2003 and 2006, the consumption of recurrently
people
ate fast
food
once a week
has
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had
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the highest number
of
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apply
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that time
which
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apply
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peaked
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at 33% and in 2013 there was a
rapidly
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fall of 5% to 28%.
Consumer
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Consumers
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who
bought
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buy
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fastfood
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fast food
ounce
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once
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or twice a month
has
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had
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an
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a
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dramatically
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fluctuation in
all
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apply
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the
period
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periods
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,
started
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starting
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at 30% and
then
sharply
fall
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falling
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to 25% and
peak
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peaking
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at
the
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highest in 2013 at 33%.
Customer
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Customers
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buy
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buying
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fast
food
several
time
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times
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a week witnessed a
slightly increased
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of 3% to reach 20 percentage
point
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points
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between 2003 to 2006, followed by a significant fall to 16% in 2013 In the first year of the given period, spending on fast
food
few
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a few
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times
a years
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years
a year
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gradually increased by 2% to reach 15% between 2003 and 2006 before
reamaining
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remaining
stable in the next 7 years. The figure
of
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for
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percentage
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the percentage
a percentage
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of
people
ate
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who ate
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fast
food
every day and never
have
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had
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thr
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the
same fluctuation with the former started at 4% and
then
marginally decreased to 3% before remaining stable
to
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until
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2013. The data for the latter
allocate
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allocated
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5% before
declined
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declining
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to 4% and
stable
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was stable
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until 2013.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, people with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food consumption
  • decade
  • trend analysis
  • frequently, occasionally, and rarely
  • significant changes
  • lifestyle modifications
  • health awareness
  • economic factors
  • public health implications
  • fast food industry
  • broader implications
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