The charts below how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurents between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The chart provides information about the
frequent
of the amount of fast Replace the word
frequency
food
consumed in the USA from 2003 to 2013
Overall
, there was a downward trend in the commonly
Change the adverb
common
people
ate
fast Wrong verb form
eating
food
restaurant
in United Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
State
. Fix the agreement mistake
States
In addition
, the amount of people
ate
once a week registered the highest figure Correct pronoun usage
who ate
throughtout
for most given of the period, which peaked in 2006. Correct your spelling
throughout
In contrast
, the proportion of consumer spending to ate
fast Change the form of the verb
eat
food
every day accounted for the lowesr
percentage Correct your spelling
lowest
lower
in
all the time.
In 2003 and 2006, the consumption of recurrently Change preposition
apply
people
ate fast food
once a week has
the highest number Wrong verb form
had
of
that time Change preposition
apply
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
peaked
at 33% and in 2013 there was a Wrong verb form
peaking
rapidly
fall of 5% to 28%. Change the adverb
rapid
Consumer
who Fix the agreement mistake
Consumers
bought
Wrong verb form
buy
fastfood
Correct your spelling
fast food
ounce
or twice a month Correct your spelling
once
has
Wrong verb form
had
an
Change the article
a
dramatically
fluctuation in Change the adverb
dramatic
all
the Correct determiner usage
apply
period
, Fix the agreement mistake
periods
started
at 30% and Wrong verb form
starting
then
sharply fall
to 25% and Wrong verb form
falling
peak
at Wrong verb form
peaking
the
highest in 2013 at 33%. Change the word
its
Customer
Fix the agreement mistake
Customers
buy
fast Wrong verb form
buying
food
several time
a week witnessed a Fix the agreement mistake
times
slightly increased
of 3% to reach 20 percentage Replace the word
slight increase
point
between 2003 to 2006, followed by a significant fall to 16% in 2013
In the first year of the given period, spending on fast Fix the agreement mistake
points
food
few
times Correct article usage
a few
a years
gradually increased by 2% to reach 15% between 2003 and 2006 before Correct the article-noun agreement
years
a year
reamaining
stable in the next 7 years. The figure Correct your spelling
remaining
of
Change preposition
for
percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
a percentage
people
ate
fast Correct pronoun usage
who ate
food
every day and never have
Wrong verb form
had
thr
same fluctuation with the former started at 4% and Correct your spelling
the
then
marginally decreased to 3% before remaining stable to
2013. The data for the latter Change preposition
until
allocate
5% before Wrong verb form
allocated
declined
to 4% and Wrong verb form
declining
stable
until 2013.Add a missing verb
was stable
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