Sugar
consumption has increased recently. Use synonyms
High level
amounts of Add a hyphen
High-level
sugar
in ready foods and drinks result in health problems and disease. It is said that the Use synonyms
price
of sugary Use synonyms
products
should be increased to stop Use synonyms
people
from buying these kinds of Use synonyms
products
and hopefully, eat less Use synonyms
sugar
. In Use synonyms
this
essay, I will delve into why I disagree with Linking Words
this
statement.
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To begin
with, encouraging Linking Words
people
to avoid Use synonyms
of consume
Wrong verb form
consuming
sugar
by increasing the Use synonyms
price
of sugary Use synonyms
products
is a compulsory solution. Use synonyms
Compel
Wrong verb form
Compelling
people
to do what or not to do would not always work. There are so many examples in history, Use synonyms
for instance
, in Iran the Linking Words
price
of cigarettes Use synonyms
have
been increased in order to make Change the verb form
has
people
smoke less. Use synonyms
Linking Words
However
it did not work. There are so many Add a comma
However,
people
who still can afford to buy expensive Use synonyms
products
. In the long term view, making Use synonyms
sugar
Use synonyms
products
expensive is not a good idea.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, there are so many more effective ways to solve Linking Words
this
problem. First of all, Linking Words
people
must be educated about the problems and the consequences of consuming extensive Use synonyms
sugar
in their diet. They must be aware of the diseases associated with eating too much Use synonyms
sugar
Use synonyms
such
as obesity or diabetes. So public awareness should be raised Linking Words
instead
of Linking Words
forceing
them. Correct your spelling
forcing
Furthermore
, another better and Linking Words
effective
way could be Correct quantifier usage
more effective
reduce
the amount of advertising Fix the infinitive
to reduce
Use synonyms
sugar-based
food or drinks.
In conclusion, Change preposition
for sugar-based
Although
the increase in the Linking Words
price
of Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
Use synonyms
sugar based
Add a hyphen
sugar-based
products
could be helpful to drop the consumption of Use synonyms
sugar
Use synonyms
temporary
, I disagree with the whole idea because it is a compulsive way and so many alternative solutions exist that can be used.Change the word
temporarily
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