The line graph shows the average number of weekly patieents vivsiting four clinics of a hospital form 2010 to 2016.

the line graph

depict

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the information about medical

patients

which were visiting hospitals of four different clinics over

an

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six

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year

periods

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between 2010 and 2016 after the analysis, it is clearly stated that

,

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the individuals who were visiting for birth control had

major

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ratio

in

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the

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beginning

begaining

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beginning

of the

year

at about 275 after

increased

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for two

year

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,

then

the number of

patients

for birth control saw

massive

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drop and hit its lower point and gradually

enhaced

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it to about 250 in total,

in contrast

, eye checking

patients

had maintained the third spot in 2010 but the growth of eye patient rise up and straight on increasing for four years (2012 to 2014)

thus

, the pattern never changed

it

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direction and sky

rockted

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to 350

patients

in

last

year

furthermore

, the number of population visiting diabetic were most lower and gradually

rise

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up in the

year

of

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2012

then

, after a small dip it went

on increasing

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to almost 200

patients

for

diabetic

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diabetics

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,

on the other hand

for dental

patients

, it saw a major drop in 2012

then

went on increasing and remained steady in the

last

year

(2016)

overall

, it is vividly manifested that the number of

patients

visiting for eye

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check

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up

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had

large

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in population for weekly

check up

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and birth control remained a second spot in weekly

visit

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to

clinic

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moreover

, dental had

lower

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ratio in total