the diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in Australian towns.
The given graph demonstrates the flow of steps on how rainwater is collected and turned into drinking
water
for human use together with
the required equipments
and facilities in some rural towns of Australia. Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
Overall
, the whole system makes use of natural rainfalls which is considered to be environmental
friendly.
Change the adjective
environmentally
To begin
, after rainfall, droplets of rainwater come down from a number of rooftops of houses in the community into pipes of drains which lead to the underground water
filter where dirty dust, small stones and mud are filtered out. After going through the water
filter, the clean water
is collected and stored in a bulky storage tank before further
action.
When it comes to a certain amount of water
in the mentioned tank, water
will flow into the treatment section where a due amount of edible sanitizers
and chemicals are added and mixed. A meter is Change the spelling
sanitisers
also
installed to check and analyse the chemical level of the processed water
. Lastly
, the drinking water
is pumped up by a powerful engine back to domestic
community for household usage.Add an article
the domestic
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