the diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in Australian towns.

the diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in Australian towns.
The given graph demonstrates the flow of steps on how rainwater is collected and turned into drinking
water
for human use
together with
the required
equipments
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equipment
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and facilities in some rural towns of Australia.
Overall
, the whole system makes use of natural rainfalls which is considered to be
environmental
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friendly.
To begin
, after rainfall, droplets of rainwater come down from a number of rooftops of houses in the community into pipes of drains which lead to the underground
water
filter where dirty dust, small stones and mud are filtered out. After going through the
water
filter, the clean
water
is collected and stored in a bulky storage tank before
further
action. When it comes to a certain amount of
water
in the mentioned tank,
water
will flow into the treatment section where a due amount of edible
sanitizers
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and chemicals are added and mixed. A meter is
also
installed to check and analyse the chemical level of the processed
water
.
Lastly
, the drinking
water
is pumped up by a powerful engine back to
domestic
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community for household usage.
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