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It is important for children to learn the differnce between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is nessary to help them learn this distinction. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children

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It's imperative to explore the differences between right and wrong for
children
 at an early age, and one of the necessary ways is
punishment
. I strongly disagree with
this
 opinion. Much scientific research has shown that there are many negative consequences of using
punishment
 in
educational
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way
. Continuous
punishment
, using fear and shame to force
children
 to change their
behavior
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behaviour
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, may cause a lack of confidence including difficulty in expressing themselves, strong personality development, and reduced creativity.
Moreover
, continuous tough
punishment
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in
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 early age, at an intense level, called adverse childhood experiences, may lead to light or severe not only mental health
problems
 but
also
 physical health
problems
.
For example
, stress and anxiety, post-trauma event disorder, and a higher risk of getting lung cancer or
overall
 health
problems
.
On the other hand
, there are
also
 numerous healthy
punishment
 ways, which allow parents and teachers to use.
For example
, in some elementary in Japan, they initiate a silent room for
children
, who do have not
well-behavior
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 in school settings, to reflect and think about what they have done, and what they should not have done.
This
 is a harmonious
way
 for
children
 to realize their
problems
 without shame or fear.
This
 method can boost their self-esteem, meanwhile,
skilfully
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 creating a safe space to be aware of negative
behaviors
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behaviours
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. In conclusion, personally, I do not believe using negative
punishment
 with young age
children
 is a good
way
 to educate. Creating a harmonizer
way
 to cope with that kind of problem will be a strong recommendation.
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