Some people say social media do more harm to the youth. Other people say they do the great to the youth. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include examples from your knowledge and experience.

Nowadays, technological advantage has

affecting

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all aspects

in

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daily life.

However

, some

people

believe that it gives negative sides to youngsters,

while

others agree that

this

can be useful.

This

essay will discuss both sides. The main argument in

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issue is since social

media

plays a pivotal role in connecting

people

from across the world, now, they are able to meet different

character

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characters

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of

people

.

However

, in many cases,

this

will not be good for their development if they are more

attach

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with

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to

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gadget

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gadgets

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than reality.

For instance

,

teenagers

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students tend to focus on their social

media

profiles

than

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rather than

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with

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on

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their grades which can hinder them

to become

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from becoming

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successful in the future.

In addition

, there are many online frauds that

targeting

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the

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youngsters as they

do

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not mature enough to know the indication of the criminals.

Hence

, those are the reasons why some groups think that the

internet

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gives

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drawbacks.

On the other hand

, the majority of individuals

is

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able to see the benefits that social

media

provide

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provides

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for them.

For example

, when they want to add their knowledge about specific materials, they can directly go to the websites and gain all of the precious information;

however

,

this

is because they can use

this

privilege wisely and understand their priority as young

people

. If parents and adults can teach them how to use online platforms wisely, they will use

this

to develop their knowledge and potential.

Moreover

, many young adults are financially success by creating digital arts

likewise

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such as

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songs, poems, and

tiktok

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TikTok

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dance;

thus

, the key point is digital world can provide great opportunities for them. In conclusion, even though

internet

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the internet

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is a dangerous place for youth, it has great access for them to pursue every

opportunities

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opportunity

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.

Therefore

, I am firmly convinced that social

media

can be extremely beneficial if we manage it right.